My Story Of The Theif In The Night?
the what if story of the century organizations would keep secret his identity but barablly fasten strings on him guiding him through there means. unerground organizations.
so the theif gets board of the strings and being spit upon moves to china a communist country far away from certain power hungry organizations saying good riddens to him. he sets up shop meets and greets people know word has it a stranger is in town. the elders ask questions, seek information from his home land confrontation happens organizations clash.
in the meanwhile shitty deals around the world effect chinas ecconomy. however everyones seeks to find knowledge of where the theif is and who he trusts. who is know in power of the chosen one. whos voice is to be heard upon the four corners of the earth. organizations gangs witches shake the foundation of china and suggest they arent going to preach to the world.
after a few years many wise masters seek advice in dark caverns set aside and well protected for the theif in the night for know the dark forces protect him. they guide him to their teaching because they want to leave their mark along side him. they devope a strong organizational pull within world underground order. many rebel suggesting who has the right to defend learn and protect the theif in the night. who has the right to speak on all our behalfes.
war breaks out organizations turn back towards the theifs homeland and condemn them to return the theif to his home. the unbarable sin of allowing the chiness to speak and rule the people of the earth is unthinkable.
who is to bare the responsibility and respect we can follow to allow the streets upon the planet to be heard. who will guide him and teach him to follow the law of the streets. who it is must treat him with respect. we dont want our opositioners (religions or government) to take our freedom of rights away.
in short the ones with strings on the theif in the night will go down in history. others such as levey have heavy burdens carring all the weight he left behind. examples of our long lasting efforts of success.
but with success your voice needs to be marked in the history books in a worthy fashion. for if the theif does get tired and bored, and moves to china how long will it take for 1 billion hungry starving chinamen to start dictating to the world their new structure of world order. rebellion against china.
where do the powers of the earth belong who has the responsibility to dictate to others. and who in life never wanted to rob a armoured car.
good luck but dont expect me to guess your values.
what kind of changes should i make
I got lost about paragraph 3 … it makes no sense at all. Perhaps if you would take the time to spell correctly people would make more sense of it.
i spent a worthless 30minutes trying to crack what i originally thought was a cryptogram. but seriously try not to get too upset about what you interpret as happening around you.
because it probably isnt.
i.e., your interpretation is wrong
Man, that was like reading a bad version of Finnegan’s Wake by James Joyce!
OK, what changes you should make? Just one in my opinion.
Re-type it so it actually makes sense.
I tried to parse your rather interestingly-spelled question but failed.